The Creative Writing

The Minecraft

Before you read: This is the game world, and Steve is the character.

Using his 700 earth blocks, the big castle was made. It was a huge castle with 17 rooms. "Whew. Housewives must be busy..." He said.

Sun started to fade away, slowly. "Ahhh! I need to sleep!" 

Steve was born on the snowy mountain. Because it was survival mode, he started to collect some items.
"Hmm....First, I need to make some...CRAFTING TABLE!"
He bleed while cutting the wood with his hand. But, there was a reward. He made enchanted able with four wood blocks. "Yay! I made it. Now what?"
The snow wind began to blow and Steve's life was getting lower and lower. He only had four hearts left.
"Aha! I need a warm, cozy house. It's freezing out here...."
He made a wood pickaxe and started to dig, and dig, and dig, until he got lots of earth he needed.
"Now, how can I go up? Wow! I am STUCK!" He was totally stuck. Then, he got an idea. He started to dig up, like a stair, until he was out. He had 700 earth blocks.
It was now a totally night. For goodness, he made a torch, and put it all over the castle. Long he worked all night trying to make better house.
Next morning, Steve only had 2 hearts left because of sleep deprivation. "Hmm.....G'night" he said, even there was nobody listening to him.
Last night, by diamond swords, he killed lots of sheep to get a soft bed. And he did it, now!

Steve pressed bed by his left arm to sleep, but the black box came out, and it said, "You can only sleep at night."
Now, he had only one heart left. Than, the ideas swooshed out from the brain. Aha!
last night, he also killed cows for fun. He ate an ate meat.
He threw it up, and putted it on the stove. He made a delicious meat jerky. "Wow! I didn't knew cooking was this easy."
By eating meat jerky, he got a FULL power. But, he still wanted to sleep. he just waite, and waited until the night came.
"Yes! Finally the night came. Hallelujah!"

 He pressed the bed again, happily. Then the black bx came out again. It said, "You cannot sleep because of monsters are near."
Steve finally got crazy. "Ahh! Terrible Monsters! I want to sleep!" Long he swore, but nothing happened.

He wore his diamond armor, and hold diamond knife. He also reloaded the arrows on his back. Opening the wooden door widely, he walked straightly to Zombie.
"Hey! You! I'll kill you!" "Uhhhh....""What?""Uhhhhhh....""What did you said?""Uhhhh.....""Let's just fight!"
Striking once with diamond sword, the Zombie died. "Kwahck!" Items came out from the body, and he ate it.
Skeleton saw this fight, and started to shoot arrows at him.
"Eek! You! You made my two hearts disappear!"
Steve ran to skeleton, and it started to run away. "No! I'll kill ya! Kome Backakakckakcak!"
like this, he followed skeleton all night, and finally killed it by morning. "Ha, ha, ha......I gotcha!"
He started to walk to home and slept in the night.
Next morning, he woke up because of the sunlight."Why there are no curtains here?!"
Insulting to the curtain, he started to remodel the castle. He made a farm and some more rooms to kill monsters.
For monster's attack, he poured lava near the castle. he also got a human spawner, and spawned villagers to farm.






Autumn came, and it was time to harvest. Some peoples were harvesting apples, while others farmed the animals like cows and chickens.

There was new success for adventure group, too. They were trying to find an Inka ancient  building. But, he found a pyramid in dessert.
Some adventurers tried to climb up the pyramid, but mistakenly sphinx's nose fell out. Cleopatra got mad of them because they broke the UNESCO building in her country.
Now, Steveland was big as a Asia. Four states were in Steveland. Snow state, dessert state, jungle state, and forest state. Most of the stevearmies were guarding the dessert state, because Cleopatra's armies were near.
All armies were armed with diamond armors, diamond swords, arrows, and diamond helmets, and was guarding  the Northern stevewall.
Stevearmies were about 10000 mans with a good strength There were six armies.
monster army(2000), north army(5000), East army(1000), South army(500), West army(1000), and sea army(500).
Architects worked hard for few years, and one of the architectures were Eiffel tower, kyungbok gung, and the sound building.Steve's new castle was built, too.
Now, Steve got a whole armies, castles,family, and had more than 30 castles all over the Steveland.







At August 27th, 1231. It finally happened. The giant Zombies started to attack. Eastern castle was almost crashed. every armies fought on the Eastern castle and walls. Lots of Zombies were dead, but there were too many of them. Steve, the king slowly walked down to the basement.....





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Cactus

Facebook vs kakaotalk

I want to ask your opinion. Is Facebook better than Kakaotalk? Why?

Funny Picture of the 'Wizard of Oz'

How could Lion find his courage from Dorothy?

Why the 'Wizard of Oz' Is Not A Good Movie

Wizard of Oz

'The Wizard of Oz' is an awful movie. I have three reasons why I think this movie is bad.

Firstly, it has too poor CG(Computer Graphic). When Dorothy was inside of the tornado, some things were flying, and it looked like the movie director pasted on the tornado like it was glued. It was SO unnatural. Also, when Glinda came down to Munchkin land, that bubble was looked awfully bad. It looked more like a gigantic color-changing ball, rather than a wiggling bubble.

Secondly, it can't be explained by scientific knowledge. Even though it is a fantasy, how can you explain the Witch melting because of water? It wasn't even hot water. It means the Witch never had touched water ever in her life. What about in the bathroom? I don't want to talk about it, but what happens if she touch ***?(Yuck!) Will she melt because of her own p**? By the way, why Dorothy didn't just turn the sand clock upside down when the Witch disappeared, instead of crying for mercy to the Witch? Is she disabled?

Lastly, I already read all the stories before, and I think, every kid in the world read the original book of the 'Wizard of Oz'. So, I think they, the movie makers should change the story a little bit, like the Wicked Witch dying because of cancer or because she's afraid of height. Maybe they could have changed some characters like Tinman and Lion.

These were my three strong reasons why I think 'Wizard of Oz' is an awful movie: the CG was poor, things couldn't be explained by scientific knowledge, and I already knew the story.

P.S Why don't you write your movie review about any movies?

My Goals

Belongings are my three goals that I want to achieve during this long, boring camp.

1. make the best blog in class. (Although I think it is impossible)
I could design a lot and think about it.
Or write some posts(which is now I'm doing now)

2. Don't get stomachache(It's hard to)
Don't eat bread for breakfast
Eat in regular patterns(Really hard because hunger)

3. Design 3 new house(Because my dream is an architect.)
Think of fresh idea
Than, look at other architectures

I hope I could achieve my three goals during this GLPS camp.

My Hobby

Everyone has something they like to do. I like camping, swimming, and playing the piano. Now, I'd like to share my three hobbies with you.I like camping, because I can eat roasted marshmallows on the campfire. Once, my father slept while roasting it, and marshmallows were in fire. Also, I can play with my younger brother inside the Hammock, and breathe the clean air.I also like swimming, because I'm good at it. Swimming is my best sport. It is thrilling, and heartbreaking. Lastly, I like to play the piano. I am now playing Chopin's Op.10 no.5, and I love it, even though it's hard. I could make my stress all fly away while playing it.Thank you, and I hope you'd share your hobby with us.